Sumi H. Inkblot

It was a great movie, I really enjoyed it =D

It 'twas in that wiki article you gave me the link to- NO! Pale green. XD

Yup. Oooh, clones, fun =D I have decided on a lightsaber co- NO! Blue silver. :pants:

LOL, Shafter! :lol: Me: I'm sorry, mom, that I didn't finish the assignment....... Mom: Well, you should be sorry, blah blah blah..... Me: :holds up Hershey's Raspberry Kiss: I was ...

=D I LOVE it! :lol: :lol: :lol: I wish I could give an in-depth 'tique...but there's too much humor and not enough words! XD

Edit: After some consideration, I decided to take down the Kismet sections until I can sort out the mess it is into decent fiction. I'm also in a story bog, ...

That's amazing! And we're starting our own journal thing? We're going to be pop-u-lar! :D It's all about pop-U-lar! =D Haha, j/k.

I nearly missed this! And yes a little strange but that's what makes it good, original! I love the style of you're writing, its mature yet also quite laid back ...

Welcome to the YWS! Good to hear you'll start writing again! Wouldn't it be terrible if you had writer's block right off the bat? :lol: Whoops, shouldn't say that........ ano....welcome! ...

the slurred phonetics of a flickering lightbulb hung like guilt over our heads and sent our shadows screeching across windowpanes and vacant voids disguised as mouths. Nick is most heartily ...

OHMYGOSH! We're famous-sort-of-I-think! :squeeee!:

Congratz! :whips around: I think there's an echo in here...=D And now for the YWS Commercial: Bartemius the Gorilla saying, "Earn your stars!" while he eats Frosted Flakes =D

Now this is cool =D every now and then - I have very bad memory- I wonder about my ratio of posts/reviews. Excellent!

Thaks for the advise B.I. I'll work on it, I guess it sounds better when it's spoken...*rubbs chin* Question: Would it flow better if it where divided up into stanzas??? ...

oh! Yay! More background on Jon. You've also managed to do this without info dump! I applaud you! =D I've decided to bold all the corrections I make and italicize ...